Oh, I've had this tab open for so long, waiting for a comment--the trouble with big bang this year was the amazing amount of stories--it's great for reading purposes, but it gets in the way of one's ability to leave proper feedback. *grins*
I had so much fun reading this story--it's a great sequel, and the way you've written the boys as grown up really, really works. I was especially fond of Mikey, a little strange but very darling and so smart, but I loved so many different things that it's hard to pick them all. The one thing I reacted to was that the resolution wasn't quite dramatic enough, given all that buildup, but since the rest of the story was so awesome, I don't mind so much. ♥!
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Date: 2009-09-07 12:22 am (UTC)I had so much fun reading this story--it's a great sequel, and the way you've written the boys as grown up really, really works. I was especially fond of Mikey, a little strange but very darling and so smart, but I loved so many different things that it's hard to pick them all. The one thing I reacted to was that the resolution wasn't quite dramatic enough, given all that buildup, but since the rest of the story was so awesome, I don't mind so much. ♥!